Monday, December 3, 2018

Lily's Literary Essey

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4 comments:

  1. FreshDecember 6, 2018 at 4:27 AM

    Lily I really liked your story it was fantastic and it was lound and clear

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  2. AnonymousDecember 6, 2018 at 4:39 AM

    I love how clear you spoke in you essay but can you please speak louder nest time. Thanks!

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  3. SabrinaDecember 6, 2018 at 4:47 AM

    Good job! Your claim is awesome! You can maybe try being more loud and clear. But other than that, it was perfect!

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  4. Philip December 6, 2018 at 4:59 AM

    I liked your evidence and your claim.

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